"Optimism and Fears"
Walking like a ghost
I was looking for my dreams
Thinking everything was gone, vanished
Drops of a desperate kingdom of thoughts
Like a horse with no meadow going nowhere
Lonely, forlorn hopes emerge
Touching suddenly my entrails
Without thinking that I am alive
Who cares? Everything changes.
"Delightful"
Flying in the clouds
My feelings go where emotions are brought
Believing I am exactly where I need to
Pure heartbeats, truthful feelings appear roughly
Like a naïve adolescent who is madly in love
Secure and fortunate of this stunning gift
No matter the way it appears
This is what life wants me to live
To live intensely
You told me that you didn't have any idea about writing poems! You could do it, you see? =D
ReplyDeleteI told you!
=D
Wow Marce! what a great poem! I mean both of them. The are really great, plus you add new vocabulary. Great job!
ReplyDeleteSee you around,
"La Vale"
Hey Marcelita!
ReplyDeleteI just want to congratulate you. This is pretty different from what I've read so far.
Great job (:
Marce
ReplyDeletewell two very good poems. The first time I read them I was confused, but them I read it again and I could understand them.
good job
take care, see you